changes for audience feedback

Changes we made with first lot of Audience Feedback:

Although we were given inspiration to add a older boy onto the roundabout in black and white, it was coming close to the editing stage when we had been given this advice so we decided that we wouldnt use this idea.

However, we edited out the 'presenting' title as we believed it could be come quite tacky and we wanted to follow what the audience had said to us.

Furthermore, we changed the font to more of a bolder style, therefore it was thicker and stood out more creating more of a thriller feel for the audience.