Audience feedback 1

First Audience Feedback

Here is our first set of class feedback for our first cut of our film, this helped us to develop further on into our final cut, so that we are ready to recieve our last bit of audience feedback the second time.

Firstly we asked the audience what they liked about our first cut:

• The roundabout fade in and out
• The sound effect added at the end
• The timing
• The extra non-diegetic sound effects throughout

Moreover, we asked them what they think needed changing within our first cut:

• The 'Presenting' title
• The 'Dichotomy' title

They said that maybe the font could be changed and the size should be not as big, and a little bit thicker to stand out rather than thin. Also they asked whether the 'Presenting' title was needed within the opening sequence. 

Also, one of the audience members commented on the idea of maybe adding a black and white version of the older boy onto the roundabout as it is spinning around, and it would create a sense of him being a 'ghost' and watching over the younger boy that he was.

Furthermore, there were mixed opinions on the younger boy crashing the cars together, as out teacher Miss Dunn believed that it was a bit 'naff', however the rest of our class members thought that it was a good use of editing and was important to the story of the film.